Day #75 - #76 - Collapse + Work on Collapse

SO I spent two days with a song.

One day writing it and the lyrics, sorting out the chords and structure.
Another day refining it somewhat.

I'd later end up showing it to 2/3 of the band (because Kegan had to skip practice) and they helped structure it further. Was fun to play, loved the work they put into it. But I count that day as a Band Practice, which will be my next post.

This one's just about the two days I spent beforehand working on it.

AND HERE ARE THE LYRICS!

(Note: I repeatedly label 'Bridge' where there should be a Riff. Also, structure has changed somewhat, so not exactly what it is there.)

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I feel this need again
In my skin
In my bones

Don't judge what you can't own
I'm alone
I'm alone

[Bridge]

Still suspect the floorboard's call
Or the phone
Or the phone

Teeth lined up and needs erode
On I go
On I go

[Bridge]
[Chorus]
I know you won't believe
What shutters blinded never see
And before you reach the door
I'm gone, I'm--

[Bridge]

Still suspect the floorboards call
Or the phone
Or the phone

Teeth lined up and needs erode
On I go
Here I go

[Bridge]
[Chorus]
I know you won't believe
What shutters blinded never see
And before you reach the door
I'm gone, I-

Clutch my chest and then collapse
Clutch my chest and then collapse
Clutch my chest and then collapse
Clutch my chest and then I-

[Bridge]
[Bridge]
[Chorus]
I know you won't believe
What windows closed could never breathe
And before you reach the door
I'm gone, I-

Clutch my chest and the collapse
Clutch my chest and the collapse
Clutch my chest and the collapse
Clutch my chest and the collapse
[Repeat 'till fade, building up and harmonising]