Saturday, 14 April 2012

Day #97 - Rewrote 'Collapse' as 'Dissolve'

 Whether I prefer the title now isn't the point, I just re-wrote the song to fit the new structure, and in doing so realised that the song cut out the word Collapse entirely. So, moved some things around and titled it 'Dissolve'. Could still change it, we'll see ;D Makes more sense to the meaning of the song anyway.

--

I feel this need again
In my skin
In my bones

[Distortion]
Don't judge what you can't own
I'm alone
I'm alone

[Riff x2]

Still suspect the floorboard's call
Or the phone
Or the phone

[Distortion]
Teeth lined up and needs erode
On I go
On I go

[Riff x2]
[Chorus]
I know you won't believe
What shutters blinded never see
And before you reach the door
I'm gone, I'm--

[Riff x4]
[Verse Chords minus Vocals 1x Time]

Still suspect the floorboards call
Or the phone
Or the phone

[Distortion]
Teeth lined up and needs erode
On I go
Here I go

[Riff x2]
[Chorus]
I know you won't believe
What shutters blinded never see
And before you reach the door
I dissolve--

[BREAK]
[4th Set of Chords for abandoned Chorus til finish, with solo and build-up. Some
Palm-muting, etc.)

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